假设你是李华，第11届全国运动会将在2009年10月11日至23日在山东省济南市举行，在此期间你的英国好友John要来济南参观，请你根据下列要点给他写一封信告诉他有关济南的情况，并表示盼望他的到来。
要点：
(1)济南市位于中国东部，是一个充满生机与活力的现代化城市；
(2)济南泉水众多，以趵突泉最为出名；
(3)主要景点还有大明湖、千佛山等；
(4)气候适宜，交通便利。
注意：(1)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)词数：100左右。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Jinan. I’d like to introduce it to you.
Jinan, which lies in the east of China, is a modern and lively city. It is well known for its springs, of which Baotu Spring is the most famous. Besides, Daming Lake and Qianfo Mountain are two great attractions. Once you come here, you will certainly be fascinated by them.
What’s more, the nice weather and convenient transport here can make your trip more enjoyable. Every year Jinan attracts a number of visitors from home and abroad. I’m sure you will enjoy yourselves in the beautiful city.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
英语作文改错
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行文流畅，表达到位。可以看出楼主的英语水平非同寻常。
题两点参考意见，请笑纳。
1.transport最好改为transportation
2.Every year Jinan attracts a number of visitors from home and abroad.是否可改为：
Every year Jinan attracts a number of native visitors and from abroad.
以上两点仅供参考。
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